Jabrosky
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As someone who loves contrasts as a theme, I like the duality in the OP too. I say keep it.
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Storytelling Question
- Thread starter BWFoster78
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JourneymanNot sure if it has been mentioned already, sorry for not reading all of the posts in advance...
Both actions seem far to similar in my eyes although plausible, personally I would maybe have your merchant character fiddle with a single coin passing it through his fingers or some such. Maybe if your soldiers characters sword has some sort of decoration like some tassels he could maybe fidget with that instead somehow
Both actions seem far to similar in my eyes although plausible, personally I would maybe have your merchant character fiddle with a single coin passing it through his fingers or some such. Maybe if your soldiers characters sword has some sort of decoration like some tassels he could maybe fidget with that instead somehow