My latest book is a huge mess and I don't know how to fix it?

[Chessie]

No worries. I was talking about our issues staying on topic. Lol

Then if that's the case count me in on that...

 

[TheCrystallineEntity]

Now I have two potential ideas.
1) Take the White Darkness story and insert it into my first book, as the protagonists' journey to ascension.
2) Leave it as is and make two books instead.