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Lumani
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I worked on this over the course of 2 days while working on my next scene....could use some more work and I may go back to it, but for now i'll say its done. 
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pmmg
Mystagogue
Very Nice!
(wow, seems I need to have at least 10 characters to post).
(wow, seems I need to have at least 10 characters to post).
Addison
Dark Lord
The bright eyes made me jump. A good jump, definitely. I think the background needs to pop somehow. The current orange-tan smoke stuff seems flat, while your horse and rider pop. Maybe a background that's more fitting, a bloody battlefield, the pits of hell, who knows. It's a great start, I can't get the rider out of my head. Terrific work there.
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Lumani
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Thank you for the words of encouragement! I definitely agree that this still needs a bit of work before I will be happy with it. It is a fun piece I will probably go back to in the future and revise!
I definitely agree that this still needs a bit of work before I will be happy with it. It is a fun piece I will probably go back to in the future and revise!
Nomadica
Lore Master
I like this, very creepy. I'd recommend making the blood on the persons face darker and the horse's front, right leg longer.