Case Study: Using Villains to Shape Your Hero

Trindall Grove
A Return to Trindall Grove

In a previous article some time ago, I wrote about developing a character named Breldin, and how I created his home setting, the town of Trindall Grove, based on the way I wanted to shape his personality over the life that he’s lived.

I want to take this moment to return to Trindall Grove in order to reflect on Breldin’s villains, and to discuss the way I’ve designed them to push his personality as the story goes forward. I hope this can serve as a case study for other writers developing their own characters.

Breldin is a young fruit picker fascinated with the subtle magics which ripple through the forest garden surrounding his home. But the water of a dark lake corrupts many of the region’s animals, warping their appearance and instilling them with bouts of insane frenzy.

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Writing a Great Villain

Loki
Loki
Loki

When it comes to villains, we’ve seen the clichés.  Dark lords.  Psychopaths.  Petty super villains who kill their own henchmen.

We’ve also heard the advice.  Villains need personal goals.  Villains need depth.  Villains need to be the heroes of their own stories.

In my experience, conversations about villains get overshadowed by the question of whether a story is about good and evil, or the morally grey.  But as authors, we need to understand what that thematic choice means for developing our characters.

Do your villains embrace their villainy or attempt to justify it?

Knowing the answer to that question will help you create the character’s arc.

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5 Characteristics of an Epic Villain

Darth Vader as depicted in The Empire Strikes ...
Darth Vader

For a fantasy story to be truly great, it needs a memorable villain.  In some cases the villain is so compelling that he or she overshadows the hero.  That’s not always a bad thing.  During my childhood every boy on the block wanted to dress as Darth Vader for Halloween.  No one wanted to be the whiny farm boy from Tatooine.

So how do you craft a villain so fascinating that he can sell a million Halloween costumes?  Looking at some of the villains whom I most admire, I have narrowed in on five common characteristics.

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