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Thanks for the update, LS! Hope things settle down for you soon. Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

@Ronald T: I've decided my search needs be (tentatively) chapter 3, so what I'm planning is to post chapters 1-3 once I finish those rewrites. But in the meantime, I just discovered the writing app Scrivener and I have a few RL things to finish, so it's likely to be a few days yet before I get...

Thanks to everyone who took the time to respond. After correcting a logic gap, removing some text where I was telling not showing, giving my heroine more evidence of suppressed emotion, and rewriting the chapter ending a couple of times, I finally got something I didn't totally hate - I told...

I'm working on revising it - including trying to "make it more personal." However, I also found a gap in the logic surrounding where the body was found, so I'm trying to fix that as well, and I've had to do some research, which is why it's still not up. I'll post it here once I think I've...

Nice idea, except Flyt doesn't just pick up random scraps of parchment. Someone has to slide them in the pocket of his message harness. Plus, most people in this world don't know what geskril are - if they saw one flying around, they might be inclined to shoot it. And since she has to keep the...

What do they mean, "Make it more personal?" I'm not sure if you'll be able to see this, but try here: Continue Writing your Book Now | Now Novel Edit: Looks like you can't, not without signing in. I need to make some other edits - for one, I have too much backstory in my first...

I am working on my first novel, so I'm new to all the tricks of the trade. Please go easy on me if this is a dumb question. I just posted the first chapter of my WIP in progress on another site to get some feedback. Among the other feedback that I got was to make the chapter ending "more...

I don't think I understand the countdown thing. We roll once to see if we got a 3 and a second time for the rounds? Or with Kell's 4 total rolls above 3 in her last roll, does that mean she gets Wave Dance for 4 rounds? Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

Ch.7: "Hot Fuzz" / Hesperides Kell begins her cast for Wave Dance, liking the possibilities of mixing with Sigrlinn's lightning-enhanced arrows. The cast feels strong, but Kell is unable to capitalize on that for some reason. Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

Would Wave Dance be more deadly with Sig's arrows? (Lightning + Water)? Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

@LS: So...if Sigrlinn is making a gravity (earth) trap, can Kell use Entangle from her staff or not? Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

Thinking, Kell adds, "Or we retreat far enough ahead of them they can't see us, wait for them to fall in the trap, THEN come back and attack them. I suppose that's probably better." Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

Kell asks, "Why not draw a long rectangle the width of the cave? Then we stand just outside it and hack or shoot down whatever walks through it?" Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

Ch.7: "Hot Fuzz" / Hesperides Kell says, "I say try to do the walls, too, but don't worry about the ceiling. Unless one of the others knows something I don't." Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk

When you say we can cast only 1 level spell, is that per player, or for the entire party? Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk