Thank-you to all. I did include the dilution, considering the rain. However, the seeping rather than spurting and such didn't occur to me... I've been re-thinking the scene a little; incorporating new elements... I thought I might have him rip out his own heart, so that he might give her...
I post on here semi-often, and normally said posts are rather trivial and/or relatively...eh... Conservative? lol However, this time I need some information on something a tad more brutal.
Okay, so, here's a little background so you can better understand my reason for seeking your insight:
My...
Okay. Soooo..... I'm seriously considering incorporating the fleur-de-lis symbol into my book. Consequently, I thought it might perhaps be interesting to have some of my characters be descendants of some of the European bloodlines who were associated with the symbol. :cool:
Anyway, back to the...
Well.... I've been writing this story since I was ten years old. I am now twenty-three. (Wow, that sounds even worse than I thought it would.) I've finished four different versions, and written countless more besides without completion. I have never published because I've never been happy with...
I have to agree with the other posters here. This is very impressive. I like the fact that the Fae are actually extraterrestrial beings. Keep up the great work!
Thank-you! I appreciate your input. It was very helpful! :cool: I intend to mix real-world events, etc., and I wanted the Prometheum element(s) to align closely with real-world figures for a smoother transition. I rather like your idea about a 'Promethian family'. I considered something like...
I'm very new to this site. I found it the other day when I was looking for a forum where I could ask questions about a name for a substance in my story. A certain [awesome] member gave me some advice, which led me to the name Prometheum, and perhaps even a derivative substance, Prometheocite. I...
I've been writing this same story for quite some time now. I'm very bad about over-editing, so I never seem to get anywhere. That aside, I need a good name for the substance that is the central source of conflict in said story. Simply put, it is pure energy. Life, magic, etc. It's everything...
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