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I had only recently heard of Wattpad so find everyone's comments interesting. Thanks for asking question :)

Negotiating seems good to me but I'd like a twist, preferably unseen though hinted at. Hence that's what I'm working on.

Not long, I just anticipate forum moderators are on a US time zone (correct me if wrong, moderators) and someone needs to be up. I could be wrong, they may have a program. But welcome aboard. Have fun exploring :)

Welcome Jorunn! this is a great corner of the internet. Good luck with the wedding!

what's in a vegetable soup? Whatever you like. As a staple I'd suggest dragons and magic but it's entirely a matter of preference.

I agree, just write it. If you need the undead for your story then include them. They'd certainly add conflict and ramp up the stakes :) Good luck!

congrats! exciting stuff :)

Welcome Fiera43! Look forward to reading your work:) In the meantime, enjoy your explore!

Hi Amber! A very interested lot of twists and turns. The Ancient Egyptians were fascinating. Readers want a climax. Do you think you have enough? If not, maybe dial up the conflict even more? Welcome aboard!

Welcome Princessbjack! you've come to the right place to improve your skills. Enjoy looking around :)

I haven't seen this but will it confuse a reader? I couldn't say. As long as the story works, then historical fiction exists, why not historical fantasy? I'd just be concerned if you're hoping to publish traditionally then it might be hard if your book doesn't fit into a genre. Go into a book...

Must say my instincts agree with Butterfly.

Maybe certain lands have been bestowed on him and he gets an income from them? I think as long as you set up "rules" of your world a reader will believe what you do in the world rules. After all, this is fantasy. I know as a reader I don't nit-pick details as long as the world "rules" are...

Can you add any parts pertinent to story at different parts of the story? I found I was more engaged from "innumerable nights..." but definitely ask the questions raised above.

Welcome Khryses (cool name), nice to welcome another Aussie! Oi Oi Oi!