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The picture is engaging, but the title is hard to read, as it really blends in with the fur. I think it's the combination of color and texture. For the back cover, have you considered a transparent black overlay for the image? Maybe black, but transparent enough to still see the wolf eye. I...

On first glance, I thought it was a topless pineapple. :( Sorry.

I know Eye of the World by Robert Jordan, published in 1990, used multiple POVs, some POVs having a chapter to themselves. Is that what you're asking? The Eye of the World - A Wheel of Time Wiki - Wikia

You're not using an increased font size for the initial character or anything, are you?

Thank you all for your replies. I had a friend read both versions, and he said the version with just 2 of the POVs was better, given the space allowed and the amount of information provided. Though a good third of the story is left out, I got to expand more on the focus, which is the guy. And...

This is just how I read blogs, but I typically avoid blogs that are story based. I read blogs to get to know people, and if I like people, I'll go look up their stuff on Wattpad if they link it, or pickup up their e-book. Since I have no investment in the characters, scenes small enough to fit...

It's for this... Open Submissions: The Guidelines! | Hodderscape

The guy has 47% of the word count, the woman has 21%, the commander has 19%, and the leader has 11%. I guess there's really one MC...

I took them out because of the link my friend sent me. That article has a synopsis of Star Wars and the only characters it mentions is Luke, Ben, and Darth Vader. But I thought it might be different for an unknown story.

The book is about a guy from our world who wakes up in a forest surrounded by dead men he doesn't remember killing. His best chance at getting home is a half-elemental woman. She is missing and two armies are searching for her. The guy is one POV, the woman is another, the leader of one army is...

Hi all, I'm trying to write a 2 page synopsis (which can be single-spaced). I've looked at a few websites, wrote my first version, sent it to a friend, who sent me this link: How To Write A 1-Page Synopsis | Pub(lishing) Crawl I'm working on version 2 of my synopsis, but my concern is that I...

Same slight off-centered title on my Kindle, but it's not as noticeable there. Oh, and you seem to be missing a space on this line: "It's disrespectful,"Katzia said.

The title is slightly off-centered on my phone, but otherwise it looks fine. I'm charging my kindle now.

I have my kindle and my phone on me, if you wanted to send it to [email protected]. Or if you tell me what the title is, I'll go buy it and tell you what it looks like when downloaded. :)