Oh my god, Lothar apparently smells like goose down and integrity. The funny thing is that he might smell like integrity, if that was ...a thing you could smell. As for the goose down, maybe I'll have to put him in a puffy jacket for the rest of his scenes. Love it.
The original brain-prompt was to rot away in a cave, which is a lot harder if we're bothering about nutritious meals, fresh water, and chapstick... Again, not a practical idea, but one of those appealing 19thc Romantic ones. The sort that vanishes after an early morning without proper...
I'm not entirely sure you're getting the hermit meditation vibe here, Chess--no noisemakers, just wasting away silently and probably using snails for lip moisturization. *sage nod*
This is a voluntary cave experience/reclusion from society, La Volpe! Basically the same as a spa health retreat. Just with more dirt, moss, and crawly things in your hair.
I hadn't even thought of the cave friends! Bats are pretty cute, in my opinion. It's just an alluring idea, isn't it... A nice dark, damp, quiet cave, never have to get up again, just watch the weather go by... I think I have an idea for a vacation.
As random thoughts go...today my brain brought up how lovely it would be if my existence was scraped from the mind of everyone who ever knew me & I was left in peace to rot in a cave, which...while impractical, is a nice concrete image and makes for something of a story prompt. Can't say...
I agree with Skip's advice: you need to spend time and writing on this character, let her emerge as a human being. It's a good instinct on your part to avoid the flat "cowed" or "rebellious" characterizations not only because they're cliche but because of how negatively they interact with race...
Oh, haha, I don't mind. Your drawings are so expressive, Crystal! It's been a long time since I put real paint on canvas... As a note, you can use imgur or Photobucket (if you're old like me) to upload images and link to them easily.
Oh, well... You're 16 or thereabouts, right? If it'd...
If you have any way to digitize them, Crystal, you should share your paintings! I'm always for more activity in the arts forum, though I'm bad at posting myself...
Sketchy thing of my grungy traveling child
(Aelun from my Top Scribe VIII entry. I also started a sketch of Tornin but his face...would not behave. I swear I'm never giving a male character short hair again)
See here, if how much I am looking forward to the rest of your elf story is any indication...you have a lot to give, Chess. Bother because you have the power to delight people--you do!
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