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    That strange sound you may have heard last night...

    Such is the dream!! Congratulations to her, and yes, send along the info when you can!
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    Writing Continuity

    I struggle with losing my ability to read my work as a reader if I go over it too much. I get so comfortable with it that it's hard to edit. Reading before bed is an awesome idea. I've been on this huge outline kick, so I think I'm going to utilize this idea with a twist; read over my outline...
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    Hello from a new member.

    Welcome to the village, Alyssa! Come learn as you read, and teach as you grow!
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    Mini-transitions

    I've heard it's best to start in the middle of some action, so what I've been trying to do is change this: --- The next morning, they packed up camp, ate a quick breakfast, and started again before the sun was up. After a few miles of hiking, the long previous day began to catch up with...
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    Big fan, new member

    Welcome, jack!
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    How can I make my writing better

    Read. When you've finished all the books, pick your favorite, and do what they do.
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    It took me an hour to write one sentence.

    I just finished The Old Man And The Sea; audible book narrated by Donald Sutherland. Amazing.
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    "Bolt out of the Blue": How to get the audience to accept the improbable?

    Since we're dicing this concept into more manageable bits, I'll go ahead and take a stab at categorizing myself; I think, after re-reading, I'm referring to "moral" foreshadowing, or the books philosophical theme.
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    It took me an hour to write one sentence.

    I'm a natural Faulkner with Hemingway envy, I think. I've been playing a writing game with myself lately; I take a paragraph of description and try to condense it into a sentence, Which is extremely difficult, but effective for condensing prose into neat, concise packages when necessary, as...
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    Random thoughts

    I hope the show gets a decent budget. I tried to watch The Shannarra Chronicles one... they could have used some slightly more expensive actors.
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    Fantasy race names

    Write what you love, and try to be as original as possible. If the market isn't ripe for publishing, either self-publish, or shelf it for better weather and keep writing. Markets circulate; The Kingkiller franchise is scheduled for a movie, a T.V. show, and a video game, which may increase...
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    Unintentional Matriarchy

    There are some really interesting studies on the cultural effects of matriarchal societies, or societies lacking strong or present father figures, on the male generations that follow. I would never swear by their accuracy, but they would be great for fantasy. A strong gang presence...
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    Writing problems

    I can very much relate to this problem; it's what kept me from finishing NaNo this year... what almost kept me from WRITING this year. I'm 80k into a novel that I completely lost speed on, slogging through the parts I considered boring writing; the bridging sections that filled in between...
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    Character Inner Monologue...ugh.

    Fight Club is my favorite reference for excellent FPN
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    What are you Reading Now?

    Just started the Harry Potter series for the first time. Audiobook.
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