Recent content by Gary Gaffney

Thanks guys, You have given me much to chew over. The information in the flash back is critical to the plot but I understand that 20 pages is quite large and I dont want the reader to have to readjust to the main plot... which I think they will... I certainly did. Okay, Ill see if its possible...

Hi guys, So I have a question that I could do with some opinions on. I decided to add a flash back to one of my character's early years in order to give some information to the reader about a race of people in my story. I had intended it to be just a couple of paragraphs but as i progressed...

Hey all, Im new to this forum type thing-y.... not entirely sure what it is that im doing but that's the way of things, is'nt it? Im in the process of writing my first story, Ive gotten quite a bit into it and Ive started to realise that I just dont have the experiance needed to complete...