Recent content by foxanthony

Really? Without seeing how the sentence fits into the rest of the piece? I see people giving this sort of advice, and it can be useful at times, but blindly stripping all the color out of a story doesn't make it better.

Are these sentences punctuated correctly? Knees bent, shoulders back, and a glittering sword held high; the man known as ‘The Ghost Killer’ landed before him. It swung, and slashed, and jabbed dramatically; illustrating it's master's mortal decree. Thanks.