Recent content by Eeirail

There is alot of traveling in it yes, and I am not done with charecter development, those would just be bages of the lowest detail, I have it all in my head just not all wrtten down yet, honestly, I would be better to make a video game rather then a novel but I love the writing and am no good...

4046.8564224 square meters [640 square miles] to be exact for the acres There are lots of different answers on how long a league is. It depends on what type of measurement you are trying to compare a league to. For instance, if you want to know how many miles a league equals, the answer would...

It is a coachman as far as I am aware.

As of right now, I am maping out more charecters to show up, desert creatures for the next few chapters, writing the chapters before this next few chapter, the Kourox [Sand people] and a side story for a template for an online contest I plan to win again... Or at least try. So do I multitask...

It really just depends for me, I start out building my world and then writing, but if I want a change in mid- write, I will go for it in a heartbeat and hope it sounds better, if it doesn't sound better then I will simply change it back and start back to the old script that I still enjoyed. So...

Well in counting, I am going to list out a few things and how many pages I have. - Creatures in storyline: 82 - Races in storyline: 180 [rounded up from 178] - Places of significence in storyline: 36 - Charecter backgrousnds and "fitting": 16 [Needs work] - Ideology, government, Economy...

You mean, like Maybe actually name them as if it were a charecter right? If that is what you mean, then yes, I have actually thought about it, and I am making something of the sort in my novel as we sit and spin our observations back and forth, you bring up some well written arguments.

I was reffering to the name change just as a thought, and the Raven thing is explained in the novel I am writing, but yes as it stands, I do understand why it would not make much sense, I chose the name due to the fear of both dragons and Ravens in superstition. I see it as an open minded...

In all honesty, this is a very detailed piece you have here, I see a few things wrong with it, but they can only be fixed through the actual storyline. I just do not completely understand why you put all this into it. I must ask one thing, are you really going to use all of this in your story...

True, honestly. I like the idea, I use all the basic crafting things, but I have never actually researched into them, maybe that will help the awful writers' block I seem to have, I must give my gratitude for this.

Oh yes, I have gathered alot of cultural ideas and such from places I have been to, i.e: the Baatara Gorge Waterfall in Lebanon.

Simply build a place in your middle- Earth that would be the equivilent of Russia, and creat a new race from that, I might not be grasping the actual concept of what you are asking, if not, tell me and I will gladly try again.

The idea of different varients of dragons bassed on the elements is a bit old-school but it is good, make sure you include special features, like if it is a cold place, give the dragon thick fur, it would be different, and maybe do about naming them something other then dragons, for example, I...

Depends on if you reference then in the story at all, personally I only did seasons.

Thank you for your answer, and I also say thank you for an actualy example, this helps alot.