Recent content by D.P. Prior

Absolutely. I'd add things like pace, voice, atmosphere, character development, plot structure, immediacy, consistency of style ... More and more indie authors are using editors these days, but not all editors are created equal.

Just a quick word to introduce myself. I'm D.P. (Derek) Prior. I'm a fiction editor (Homunculus Editing Services) and author of the Chronicles of the Nameless Dwarf and the Shader series of epic fantasy novels. I found Mythic Scribes on Facebook -- seems a great place for all things fantasy...