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    Footsteps of the Undead

    I wrote a little zombie novelette a while ago and I thought I'd share it with you. The story is called Footsteps of the Undead and presents a new twist on the stale zombie genre. I took the common tropes of the sub genre and turned them on their head and deconstructed the norm. I pulled no...
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    Your Goal

    I like to write something that is unique. My goal is really sime. To have the reader walk away satisfied, happy, content, ect.
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    Hello all. I have a new novelette available.

    I haven't posted in some time. I've actually been quite busy. Anyway a have a new ebook that has been released. It's available at all the usual places like amazon, kobo, scribd, ect. It's not quite out on Barnes and Noble but should be soon. Anyway, the name of my ebook is called Footsteps...
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    My new ebook, which is a short story, is now available for sale.

    The Sparrow, which I posted some of the story on this site in the showcase section, has gone through editing and is now ready for sale. It will be available on amazon, barnes and noble, itunes, and other online ebook vendors. Currently, it is available on the authorhouse site for 3.99. The...
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    A Breath Before Sunrise scores a perfect Five out of Five stars in first review.

    Here is the official link for the book review. https://www.forewordreviews.com/reviews/a-breath-before-sunrise/
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    A Breath Before Sunrise scores a perfect Five out of Five stars in first review.

    Here is the review from Foreword Clarion Reviews. The links to find it on the website aren't up yet so here is the review in full. Check out the book at Amazon, Itunes, Barnes and Noble and various online retailers...
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    How to let the reader know...

    I struggle with stuff like this. Usually, after I write something like that it ends up seeming like an information dump. I try to avoid that but sometimes it just happens.
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    Flash Back format

    In my third book I used a form of flashbacks or memories. The character got an order that she had to capture her best friend or terminate. That whole wanted dead or alive thing. As she read the dossier she began to have memories about her relationship with the character and her one friend. In...
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    Often-used phrases?

    I noticed in sci-fi, fantasy, and horror for that matter that fangs seem to be described alot. Usually, with some sort of saliva dripping from them. The creatures fangs glistened in the moonlight or some sort of derivative from that.
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    Who says modern novels can't employ descriptive writing

    Now, what if he went on to describe the smells and such. That would of been crazy immersion. Speaking of description, I don't know if any of you have ever read Sometimes A Great Notion by Ken Kesey. His writing was so beautiful. He is an incredible influence in my writing.
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    Who says modern novels can't employ descriptive writing

    I got blamed for author intrusion in my first book. Looking back I think the main reason was I just wanted to make sure people knew what a particular object was that I used as a metaphor or something. Then again, I got blasted for using to many metaphors. So perhaps, my book needed more author...
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    Who says modern novels can't employ descriptive writing

    Actually, that first passage did seem like a list. Kind of a bit of author intrusion maybe? Personally, I could of been happy with reading just one or two examples. I felt like I was in botany class for a moment:(
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    Who says modern novels can't employ descriptive writing

    That's kind of the mantra that I went for in my first work. I went for the atmosphere and setting and the characters just played the part in the area around them. I don't know but to me the heavy description breaths life into books that would other wise be bland. That's just my opinion. I've...
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    Who says modern novels can't employ descriptive writing

    I am all for beautiful prose and descriptive writing. Sometimes I get a bit purple but I feel the description enriches the experience of the reader. If I am reading something I want to be able to imagine the smells, the breeze, the lighting, the emotion, ect... In the review of my first book I...
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